have not my words melted your heart?
has not my song soothed the hunger of your soul?
early this morning the frog green whistles
echoed through the foggy marsh thistles
capturing the longing of a friend for a friend…is this your part?
have not my words melted your heart?
has not my song soothed the hunger of your soul?
…the breakfast was lonely…despite the watering orange
that juiced the tangerine sauced pastry
my being longing for more…in this dark
have not my words melted your heart?
has not my song soothed the hunger of your soul?
the afternoon rain clouds giggled in delight
as its thunderous hammer struck deep my plight
voicing the sound of my sorrowful part
have not my words melted your heart?
has not my song soothed the hunger of your soul?
wanting, waiting…anticipation…
the sugar sweet strawberry red sunset
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May 19, 2002
Beautiful and sensitive!
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really some good imagery in this one–pulls the reader into the setting. emotion of the pleading is strong also.
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The repetition works very beautiful here. A balance to the turning movement.
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