English: from the NOAA photolibrary. http://www.photolib.noaa.gov/ (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
between now…
and the next time…
life continues on
with anticipating rhyme
between n
ow…
and the next time…
ideas bombarding one another
will you still be mine?
between now…
and the next time…
lightning strikes
amid the sublime
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Beautiful, sublime, anticipatory, poetic look at time! They just keep getting better.
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thank you for your descriptive words, Miss Betty!
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I like the lightening striking “amid the sublime”. It echos the uncertainty expressed in the question “Will you still be mine?” The lightening within the sublime may be seen as an awesome phenonemon meaning “yes” or may be seen as jarring, meaning “no”. Great poem!
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thank YOU so much! I love your interpretations and the time you take to express them to me! You are so very kind!
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