drawn into LOVE

sometimes the force draws you in

all conscious thought dissipates

you no longer feel your hands

you no longer feel your feet

your body disappears altogether

your emotions fill your being

you forget yourself

you are drawn in towards  the other

you are no longer you

you are ONE

you are pure love

the sun is no longer the sun

you become one with the glow

the colors blend with your soul

you are totally absorbed

you are no longer you

you are ONE

you are pure LOVE

the waves wash over your being

swimming in crystal water love

you and the water become one

you are no longer you

you are ONE

you are pure LOVE

you no longer feel alone

your self has disappeared

totally immersed in feeling

you are no longer you

you are ONE

you are pure LOVE

love becomes you

14 thoughts on “drawn into LOVE

  1. Jeff Nguyen says:

    Simple, yet eloquent. Nice poetry.

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    • thank you, Jeff…i feel that it still does not say what i want it too…i am always writing about love–so my friend in Edmonton whom I have never met in person says…smile…maybe one day i will say it like i desire to have it be…thank you for your visits to my blog! I appreciate you visiting and the time you have taken to comment!

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  2. inourstars23 says:

    Lovely 🙂 I enjoyed it very much!

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  3. Yoshiko says:

    Covered in love? 🙂

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    • …so it seems! smile…[how did you find the “smile emoticon?” ありがとう Arigatō, Yoshiko~ コメントありがとうございました!そして私のブログにそのような忠実な訪問者であることをありがとう!それははるかに高く評価されて!神あなたの一日を祝福!Komento arigatōgozaimashita! Soshite watashi no burogu ni sono yōna chūjitsuna hōmon-shadearu koto o arigatō! Sore wa haruka ni takaku hyōka sa rete! Kami anata no tsuitachi o shukufuku!

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  4. Praveena says:

    Refreshing poem.Love this so much 🙂

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  5. lgyslaine says:

    you are ONE

    you are pure LOVE
    everything you say in these few words. I love this poem. 🙂

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  6. This is like a breath of fresh air. powerful 🙂

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    • dear Celestine…your words move me so…thank you…i was feeling so unloved and then I realized how loved I am …and how much friends like YOU, on WordPress, have given me new life and meaning!

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  7. Lovely! Nice blog by the way, really love what you have going on here.

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