sometimes the force draws you in
all conscious thought dissipates
you no longer feel your hands
you no longer feel your feet
your body disappears altogether
your emotions fill your being
you forget yourself
you are drawn in towards the other
you are no longer you
you are ONE
you are pure love
the sun is no longer the sun
you become one with the glow
the colors blend with your soul
you are totally absorbed
you are no longer you
you are ONE
you are pure LOVE
the waves wash over your being
swimming in crystal water love
you and the water become one
you are no longer you
you are ONE
you are pure LOVE
you no longer feel alone
your self has disappeared
totally immersed in feeling
you are no longer you
you are ONE
you are pure LOVE
love becomes you
Simple, yet eloquent. Nice poetry.
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thank you, Jeff…i feel that it still does not say what i want it too…i am always writing about love–so my friend in Edmonton whom I have never met in person says…smile…maybe one day i will say it like i desire to have it be…thank you for your visits to my blog! I appreciate you visiting and the time you have taken to comment!
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Lovely 🙂 I enjoyed it very much!
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thank you so much…i enjoyed writing it…blessings on YOU and your day! thank you for honoring me with your visit and taking the time to comment!I have tried to find your blog–but I cannot! On your Gravatar you must manually link your wordpress site to it or no one can find you! Help! Thanks!
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Ill be sure to do that 🙂
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Covered in love? 🙂
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…so it seems! smile…[how did you find the “smile emoticon?” ありがとう Arigatō, Yoshiko~ コメントありがとうございました!そして私のブログにそのような忠実な訪問者であることをありがとう!それははるかに高く評価されて!神あなたの一日を祝福!Komento arigatōgozaimashita! Soshite watashi no burogu ni sono yōna chūjitsuna hōmon-shadearu koto o arigatō! Sore wa haruka ni takaku hyōka sa rete! Kami anata no tsuitachi o shukufuku!
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No worries. Jane, don’t force yourself to write Japanese. Just write English will do 🙂 God bless you too
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Refreshing poem.Love this so much 🙂
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you are ONE
you are pure LOVE
everything you say in these few words. I love this poem. 🙂
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This is like a breath of fresh air. powerful 🙂
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dear Celestine…your words move me so…thank you…i was feeling so unloved and then I realized how loved I am …and how much friends like YOU, on WordPress, have given me new life and meaning!
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Lovely! Nice blog by the way, really love what you have going on here.
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Thank you, Kim! Thank you for your visit…I enjoyed your blog also!
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